2008년 4월 20일 일요일

The Strange Man's Arrival

The mysterious man with bandages foot to head, and wearing his glasses, went to an inn. And the inn keeper, Mrs. Hall, asked him for his coat and his hat to dry them, but he refused it. Mrs. Hall thinks he is badly injured.
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Anonymous Scout :

Please watch out for sentence fragments. Your first sentence is a fragment. You also need another comma after Mrs. Hall.

2008년 4월 21일 오후 7:39
JUDY :

You need to put an 'an' before the word 'inn'.^^

2008년 4월 22일 오전 2:31

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