2008년 4월 23일 수요일
Chp. 3 The Thousand And One Bottles
On 10th of Feb, the invisible man's luggage arrived to the inn, in his luggage, there were a box of books, boxes, cases and glass bottles. One time, for an accident, a dog bit him in his leg. He was bleeding, and he ran up to his room and was getting change. A man, Fearenside ran up to the stranger's room, but all he saw was nothing. He was shocked.
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Good start, but please carefully write these entries.
Your first sentence is a run-on.
The word accident is misued in this entry.
Your next to last sentence should say "but he didn't see anything." How can you see all of nothing?
"ans" should be "and". you can click spell check before you post an entry in case you didn't know.
You've done a very nice job. You might want to post a couple more summaries so that you aren't very far behind. Checking and proofreading your entries before posting them may help you have less typos.
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